tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2216178856677207859.post60353856123030307..comments2023-10-14T11:05:04.581-04:00Comments on Capitol Cougar: Dazu, Bless YouSally Wildehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14818000777385527996noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2216178856677207859.post-38394101422980449182013-12-04T20:25:24.592-05:002013-12-04T20:25:24.592-05:00disoctp 50I was hoping for a Thanksgiving musing. ...disoctp 50I was hoping for a Thanksgiving musing. I would have been thankful for that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2216178856677207859.post-74187083874699611442013-11-08T22:14:44.628-05:002013-11-08T22:14:44.628-05:00Damned good. Love how "venture" is the e...Damned good. Love how "venture" is the end of the sentence yet the first word of the line. Nice preface. Poem is mesmerizing, about the mesmerized. Evocative, yearning,<br /><br />revealing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2216178856677207859.post-86683762500300939092013-10-01T20:39:22.104-04:002013-10-01T20:39:22.104-04:00Love this one. A lot. Has a new element - a more...Love this one. A lot. Has a new element - a more stately rhythm, almost undulating?<br /><br />"Venture"...perfect word in every way. Adventure, vent (eyes, lips)...really evokes that tension you feel when your child, usually so vocal, softly shuts those doors on you. And you're awed by the magnitude of what truly lies beyond there. You control every minute of her day, can't you press it farther, venture forth...no, you can't, & shouldn't.<br /><br />Really astonishing. Reminds me of the sunset purple of my daughter's eyelids when she sleeps (she's 8 now) & the new one soon to come! A beautiful preview, thanks!Slothropnoreply@blogger.com