Saturday, November 21, 2015

Been Here, Dune That

The Reason
You'll have to accept wondering
Until it's over. Every morning,
You get closer to knowing:
You were here
To play the song
That turned her mood
Around that night.

Oh hero,
There, they're
Singing--hear?

Photo: Mine. Oregon Dunes National Park. I surfed that fucker until I fell down.

4 comments:

Slothrop said...

This has perfect rhythm. Reading it aloud, it does sound like music. Your vowels chime so beautifully together.

ex57230 said...

You've created a couple of intriguing scenes in my head. Done in very few words.

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